Monday, March 12, 2012

Part of Chapter 1

I have been writing something for a while now. Here are the first 9 pages of it:



Mr. Cruxton’s suit was doing its best to keep him from expanding. It appeared that for the moment a truce, albeit a tenuous one, had been reached between suit and skin and so the leather belt and ivory buttons had nothing to worry about. The suit itself was a nice single-breast, professional charcoal gray, tailored and obviously expensive, but you could guess that it had looked better on a mannequin or a fashion magazine or wherever Cruxton had first seen it and decided that it would look that good on him as well. Fat and skin spilled out from Cruxton’s starched collar, folding over itself again and again, much like the way little boys and girls draw curly hair on stick figures.
Once Shred took his eyes off of Cruxton’s chins they soon went to Cruxton’s stomach, which gave Cruxton the strange appearance of being pregnant, though Shred highly doubted, and actually hoped, this wasn’t the case. He really wasn’t a pleasant man to look at.
Mr. Cruxton had introduced himself as Mr. Cruxton to Shred, which seemed a bit odd since Shred had never met anyone named Mister, but Shred had taken it well and shaken Cruxton’s hand and looked him square in the eyes and not the chins or the baby-belly and called him Mr. Cruxton and said how much of pleasure it was to be here and how excited he was about the opportunity and then he sat down in the leather chair across from Cruxton, whose first name he didn’t know and never would.
It was closing in on 105 degrees outside. Inside Cruxton’s office, the temperature dropped to somewhere close to 50 thanks to the ceiling fan, two a/c units on full blast and one surprisingly quiet miniature desk fan. All the sweat that Shred had accumulated on his walk from the parking lot to the entrance was now freezing to his body, making it difficult for him to focus on anything other than trying to not shiver uncontrollably. As he tried to hide the seizure his body so desperately wanted to have, Shred wasn’t quite sure why all the leaders of business hadn’t gotten together somewhere and agreed that suits didn’t fool anybody anymore and they were no longer needed because then they could hold a big fundraiser and auction off their thousand-dollar ties and gold cuff-links and donate all the proceeds to cancer research and maybe that donation would be the break-through and hundreds of thousands of lives would be saved. It was a bit of a reach, Shred realized, to imply that by unofficially pressuring its employees to dress formally the business world was partially responsible for deaths caused by cancer. But he was cold and more than willing to make that reach.

-“I bet you hear you look exactly like your old man all the time, don’t you?” Cruxton asked.

You’re the first to point that out, actually. Only fuckwits who don’t have much to say but desperately want to say something would point out that I bear a striking resemblance to the man whose DNA created me, and you sir, especially given how well you’re dressed, can’t be a fuckwit. No way. You wouldn’t watch a football game and say something like “well, there’s still a lot of football left to be played,” after the first quarter ended, as if everyone else watching had no idea that the game didn’t end after the first fifteen minutes. I used to sit next to this girl in lecture, Cassie; her tits were about as big as yours. Anyways, one time after lecture was over Cassie and I were hanging outside of class and one of Cassie’s friends came over and asked Cassie if she knew anything about pregnancy and Cassie said she knew a little bit and then her friend asked, “do you know if your baby can get pregnant if you like, have sex while you are like pregnant?” It’s an amazing question, partly because Cassie’s friend seemed so damn genuine and didn’t even look pregnant herself. Your question made me think of that. Does that answer your question?

-“Once or twice,” Shred said. “Better him than my mother, right?”

      The line got the desired laugh from Cruxton, whose neck reverberated with each chortle. All Shred could think about was a bowl of Jell-O in unsteady hands.  

-“I remember when your father looked like you do now. Us dinosaurs were both your age once, believe it or not. Long time ago that was, of course. Long time. It’s funny. Just the other day my oldest grandkid, he comes up to me and he said “grandpa, how big were iPods when you were young?” What do you say to that?”

      Shred laughed, then smiled for what he guessed was an appropriate amount of time. Then there was a silence and Shred wasn’t sure exactly he was supposed to fill it with, so he didn’t. Maybe Cruxton was forming a solution in his head of how to stop babies from becoming pregnant.

The silence lasted long enough that it became audible. Cruxton suddenly looked at Shred’s résumé much like you would a new dinner menu, his eyes up and down, up and down, moving too fast to actually be reading anything but moving nonetheless to give the appearance of close scrutiny and in the hopes of finding something worth latching on to.   

-“Business major, huh? What made you choose that?”

Call it the lesser of twenty evils. I didn’t want to be a male nurse for obvious reasons, and I didn’t want to be involved in anything that required more school after all the school I’d already taken. I didn’t want to teach because I didn’t want to become like any of my teachers. And the rest just didn’t sound interesting. Even business didn’t sound interesting, it just sounded the most impressive, and when I told everyone that’s what I wanted to study they all seemed impressed, or at least impressed enough to nod and not ask me why I was majoring in business. As it turned out, the only thing that made studying business mildly worthwhile was Cassie, and that’s because she had a phenomenal rack and wore colorful tank-tops to class. 

-“Well, I’ve always had a passion for business. As you know, that’s the route my Dad chose, and uh, growing up and watching him in his work and having discussions about it around the dinner table, it’s just something I’ve known that I wanted to be involved with, something I’ve had a passion for, something I know I could be great at.”

      The recital had officially begun, though officially, the recital was an interview. Cruxton nodded at all of this approvingly.  

-“And so Shred, tell me a little bit about what you’re doing now.”

You mean besides sitting in this fucking icebox, gradually acquiring frostbite? I’m a bartender, just like it says on my résumé, but you’re asking because you just want to hear me say it out loud so you can feel like you’re doing me a favor by sitting here and talking to me and offering me a life-line to the real world; hearing me say it makes you feel better that you’ve never been a bartender and will never have to be one and your son who’s my age is a banker and not a bartender and neither is your wife or your other son, who oddly enough, looks like you too. Has anyone ever told you that?

-“Well, I’m uh, currently a bartender and manager at a place down on fifth called The Alamo. It’s uh--”

-“The Alamo? Like the real one down in San Antone?”

That’s my favorite thing about you, Mr. Cruxton. You’re always good for an incisive comment or two. Yes. The bar I work at is exactly like the Alamo in “San Antone.” In fact, we exhumed a few of the bodies from the “real one down in San Antone” and have them displayed on the walls in glass cases so people can feast their eyes on a few corpses as they drink and we even have a sign out front that says “No Mexicans Allowed” – our funny little way of combining tragic history with a little bit of humor. And in the back we sell t-shirts that say “I got so drunk last night I didn’t remember the Alamo” and then after everyone’s clocked out and the bar’s cleaned and locked, we all go outside to our cars and drive down the “real one in San Antone” and piss on the graves of the men we haven’t dug up yet just to finish the job.  

-“No, not really. Just the same name I guess. Owner’s born and raised here. Just a big fan of Texas apparently, or at least the Texas spirit.”

-“Do you like it? The job, I mean?” Cruxton asked.

-“It’s not a dream job, by any means. But it’s a way to pay the bills. The silver lining, you could say, is that it constantly reminds of what I don’t want to be doing.”

-“Right,” Cruxton said as he gave Shred’s résumé another once over. “So what exactly do you want to be doing?”

I want to be anywhere but here, doing anything but this. Maybe start off somewhere in the south of France, Toulouse sounds nice but then again so does Montpellier, and then perhaps gradually drift down across the Pyrenees into Barcelona and stay somewhere quiet along the coast and disappear for a few years and learn Spanish just to see what may come. Dublin also comes to mind and I’m not exactly sure why. I’ve always imagined it cold and green, which both sound appealing. But the truth is I don’t know what I want, no matter how many people ask me. I have an idea – different sounds and pictures and sensations, really – but it’s still murky, and so the best answer I can give is that I just want to go somewhere nice and be still enough to let everything settle.

-“Professionally, I’d like to start a career. I want to be challenged. I want to have room for growth. I want to learn. I want to gain experience--”

      On Cruxton’s desk was a black phone that was the same phone you’d find in every office in the city. It had plenty of LED lights and gray buttons and it was all plastic and it fit perfectly with the rest of the office because the rest of the office was full of everything you expected to see in an office and absolutely nothing you wouldn’t. The wall was a smattering of diplomas and certificates and newspaper clippings and a few photos of Cruxton with important looking people but strangely not one photo of his family, unless his family was comprised of old men in suits who liked to shake hands.

Anyways, the black phone started to ring and Cruxton answered it, but didn’t say much other than uh-huh and of-course. You could tell he wanted to say more, but each time he was about to he’d look up at Shred and remember that he wasn’t alone and so he’d pause and swallow whatever he had been about to say.  
There’s only so much one can uh-huh and of-course at and soon Cruxton hung up the phone and squinted at Shred, trying to remember if he’d said anything revealing or anything he wasn’t supposed to, but evidently felt satisfied because soon his eyes un-squinted and settled back on the sheet of paper that told the story of Shred’s life with important words like generated and customer-service representative.

From the front pocket on his dress-shirt, Cruxton produced a pen and uncapped it and scribbled something down. What exactly, Shred couldn’t tell, because Cruxton guarded it like a student who doesn’t let others cheat off of him. When he was done writing, Cruxton took the paper and put in one of the drawers of his desk and then put the pen back in the same pocket.

-“Sorry about that,” Cruxton said.

No you’re not.

­-“I told Jessica to hold all my calls but that was, uh--.” Cruxton stopped himself. “Anyways. Where were we, again?”

We were wading through this thing, one predictable question at a time, though we hadn’t yet reached the proverbial deep-end where you ask me how I see myself fitting in and what I think I could bring to the table here.

-“I was telling you about what I want to do.”
-“Yes, yes. Of course. I remember, now. Experience, right?”
-“Right.”
-“Experience,” Cruxton said again, as if the word meant something different this time around, but then he couldn’t find anything to follow it up with and the office became so quiet you could hear the air-conditioning unit.

      As Cruxton thought about what to say next, Shred thought about what he actually wanted to do. The bar had given and taken plenty in the little more than a year he’d been there. There would always be reasons to leave -- the weird hours, the shifts where he hadn’t made enough to pay for a tank of gas, the demeaning feeling somewhere in his core when he cleaned glasses or poured drinks for certain people -– but then there were the nights where he’d make $700 and the stress and the repetition and the backwards hours and the stasis and the shame and the non-tippers were all worth it and he’d almost feel guilty about how much money he’d made in one night. Almost. Last Friday had been one of those $700 nights, a little more actually, but Shred was still here, still wearing the suit he hadn’t put on since graduation, answering fake questions with fake answers. He looked around the office but more so at Cruxton who was still lost and wondered if this really was progress or something else.
      Perhaps making way for what he’d just thought of, Cruxton cleared his throat.

-“Shred. I’m not going to waste any of our time, here. There’s an opening and even though you’re not as uh, qualified as some of the other applicants, I know the type of man your father raised you to be, and I know the asset you’d be here. And while I can’t put this on paper, I can almost assure you that if you do what you’re supposed to around here, if you work hard I’d guarantee that by the time you’re thirty, thirty-five, you’d be an account manager, and you’d never have to worry about money again. How does that sound?” 

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